edwardpotato's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Kofi - Part 2: Mercebinaries]

Cool.

kofi-noob responds:

Thanks!

[Kofi - Part 1: Startville]

This series has a lot of potential. I think you should perhaps improve the lip syncing. Also, the behaviors of the characters do not fit with their dialogue. It comes out as unnatural. Like at 9:41, or rather -3:00. I think you could also make the character's eyebrows move to more accurately depict emotions. Other than that, great job!

kofi-noob responds:

Thank you very much for taking the time to review our work. The lips are synced to the original version in Spanish (the English version is a dub), but we'll consider working on that in future episodes. We want to improve in any aspects so thanks for your advices and support!

[Tv Time]

Cool, a very nice statement on how bullshit television is. I don't know if this was your decision or not, but I like the unfinished aesthetic of the art style. Next time, if you have the time to do so, perhaps you could make the art style look a little MORE finished.

BubblyBlueJelly responds:

Ah thank you so much! It was for the most part going to be very sketchy looking anyway, but the program I was using decided it was too much and I didn't get much time to do much more than finish the actual animation. I had really wanted to color more and add more minor details but I just did not have the time. Thank you again man I really appreciate it!

[Jar of Pickles]

This was great. A good mix of dark humour and complete randomness. The child reminds me a lot of Morty.

mrjoeyprosser responds:

Big fan of Roiland so this made my day.

[Bad Dream]

The art style is kind of cool, but I think you REALLY need to fix your procrastination problems. Also, it's just a combat-based thing, nothing really fleshed out and original enough for me to enjoy, but that's just my opinion. Maybe someone thought this was the shit, but that person isn't me.

RannitX responds:

Thanks for leaving a review even tho this isn't your type of video. I appreciate the input.

[Aura Arms - Episode 28]

eh, it's alright.

MC-Skeptik responds:

Fair enough. Thank you for the comment!

[Dream Wizard]

Great style, and it was kind of funny, but there was a HUGE, IMMENSE lack of sound effects. Also I was kind of lost towards the end.

KloudKat responds:

Preaching to the choir. Had I not had to work at a convention over the weekend before submission, I'd have definitely been able to submit it first go with the sound work. Now I can get to work on actually doing that and fixing some of the clarity because there was a bit I had to cut for the submission date.

[Slipp's Dream?- Summer Jam Bad Dream]

Honestly, I think there is a lot to improve on, but it could be much worse. I am a sucker for dream related things, so I can at least give this a 2. It's also kind of ambitious for a flash movie (if that's what it is...)

NexGenBros responds:

For the most part we had to draw out each slide. We are extremely low budget at the moment but, this was our first animation! Thank you for the review, if you have any advise for the future please we are open to any and everything!